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EXAMPLE
PROPOSAL
Condensed Fairy Tales
A Guide to
Telling Your Children the Fabulous and Famous
Fairy Tales That You Knew Once Upon a Time
(This book was
published by Penguin books as Tell Me a Fairy
Tale. It is currently in print.)
©Adler &
Robin Books, Inc. All Rights Reserved.
This document is
posted here for information purposes and may not
be edited, altered, sold or re-published in any
form.
by Bill Adler,
Jr.
Is your three-year-old getting
tired of hearing Goldilocks every evening?
Are you getting tired of telling it? Do you wish
you knew another fairy tale? And do you wish you
had a quick and easy source for fairy tales?
Then Condensed Fairy Tales:
A Guide to Telling Your Children the Fabulous and
Famous Fairy Tales That You Knew Once Upon a Time
is the book that will answer your dreams. Condensed
Fairy Tales contains summaries of 51 of the
most popular children's fairy tales, fables and
legends. Each fairy tale condensation is no more
than three pages, so it won't take longer than
five minutes to get up to speed on any particular
story.
Some of these stories are
classics like Little Red Riding Hood.
Others are classic American tales such as John
Henry. Others are from African-American
literature, such as The Little Bird Grows.
Still others are from Native American cultures,
like The Little Scarred One. Some of the
tales are from distant landsTwo of
Everything is Korean; Casperl is
German.
Each condensation contains:
1. a brief summary of the
story;
2. a description of the
characters in the tale;
3. a plot description;
4. how to tell the tale.
Each tale will be accompanied
by an illustration. The illustration isn't to
show to your child (though you can); rather its
purpose is to give the parent a better sense of
the flavor of the story. Many legends and fairy
tales have rhymes; these will be included.
If you ever used Cliff Notes
you'll recognize the enormous potential and
time-saving abilities of a book like Condensed
Fairy Tales. Like Cliff Notes, Condensed
Fairy Tales is designed to help you with your
mission.
This book was conceived by Bill
Adler, Jr. who got very, very tired of telling Goldilocks
to his two-and-a-half year-old daughter, Karen,
every night and nap time. While there was no real
evidence that Karen was tiring of the tale, Bill
was. And when in the interest of sanity, he
skipped a part, like the business about sitting
in the chairs, Karen was quick to insist
"the chairs!"
If only he knew something else
to tell!
The problem was that Bill had
little interest in buying fairy tale anthologies.
First, a complete collection would have been
expensive, and heavy to carry back from the
store. Second, to actually read outloud the tales
from a book would take nearly half an hour each
evening. Karen would never put up with leaving a
tale unfinished for the next night. Finally, it's
much more enjoyable to tell a story, than
read oneespecially if you know the ending.
When you tell a story, there's unlimited
flexibility; your imagination can permeate the
tale. Once you know the basic plot of a story you
can embellish it, even personalize it to
incorporate your child if you wish. Or you can
shorten the story to hasten the advent of
dream-time.
The book will include an
introduction that explains how to tell a fairy
tale, and how to change one to suit your whimsy.
Condensed Fairy Tales is
not a long bookdeliberately so. Condensed
Fairy Tales is meant to be unintimidating.
Parents don't want to reread all the classic
fairy tales and legends themselves; they just
want to tell them for their children to enjoy. By
keeping Condensed Fairy Tales short,
potential buyers won't be frightened away.
The Market
Unfortunately, there is no
specific, targetable group of potential buyers
for Condensed Fairy Tales as there would
be for a book on, say, birdfeeding or golf. That
does not mean, however, that the market for this
book isn't strong or deepon the contrary,
there is ample evidence that the market for this
book is superb.
Pollsters tell us that people,
and parents in particular, value time. When asked
whether they would rather have a salary increase
or more vacation time, most middle and upper
middle class Americans insist that they would
rather have more time. Time to spend with their
families, their children, at home. People joke
about the term "quality time;" yet this
is exactly what many of us seek. Condensed
Fairy Tales helps satisfy that need.
Exactly who will buy Condensed
Fairy Tales? An educated parent, male or
female, who believes that his or her child
deserves more than stale, ordinary, and often
sexist, fairy tales. This parent will be employed
full-time, and will have an urge to spend more
time with the children.
How do these parents describe
themselves? Smart, harried, successful, well read
(at least once upon a time, when they had time).
These parents also admit that they have forgotten
many fairy tales and are simply at a loss to tell
their children anything other than mangled
versions of Goldilocks or Little Red
Riding Hood.
Condensed Fairy Tales is
aimed at parents with children between the ages
of one and eight years. It fills an important
market niche among parenting books.
The Competition
` How to count the competition?
There is plenty. Most of the competition, however
falls into one of two categories: anthologies of
fairy tales, and illustrated, individual books of
fairy tales. Nearly every major publisher has
produced these kinds of books. Books of both
categories are too numerous to list herethey
number in the hundredsbut it is apparent
that these books differ markedly from Condensed
Fairy Tales. Look at The Random House Book
of Fairy Tales (by Amy Erlich, $17.00, 205
pages, hardcover, Random House, 1985), for
example. This is a lovely book, as attested to by
the fact that it's been in print since 1985. But
it is typical of fairy tale anthologies: long
stories, lavishly illustrated. Parents are
supposed to read these stories, or children can
read them on their own when they're old enough.
The Random House book contains
the traditional tales. If you want to read, well,
less traditional children's stories, you have to
hunt a little for an anthology like Afro-American
Folk Tales (by Roger Abrahams, $15.00, 325
pages, cloth, Pantheon books, 1985.) Not all the
stories in this book are meant to be read to
children, as some are longer than the attention
span of a typical child. But Afro-American
Folk Tales is a good reference book, and it
preserves some important stories. The same
comments can be made for Gypsy Folk Tales (by
Diane Tong, $12.95, 252 pages, paper, Harcourt
Brace Jovanovich,1989.) It's a valuable book,
though not necessarily a good book to read to
children.
There is an abundance of books
about individual fairy tales. Most of these range
in price from about $4.95 for paperbacks to
$19.95 for four-color illustrated books. These
are books that parents read and show to their
small children; in the hands of toddlers these
books don't last long.
Perhaps the most direct
competition to Condensed Fairy Tales comes
from Shari Lewis' One-Minute Favorite Fairy
Tales ($3.99, 48 pages, paper, Dell, 1985.)
Shari Lewis, whose fame comes from the morning
children's television program featuring the
puppet Lamb Chops, has written a series of these
books including One-Minute Bedtime Stories,
One-Minute Animal Stories, and One-Minute
Scary Storiesthirteen in the series in
all. These are terrific books, and are indeed
competitive to Condensed Fairy Tales. But
Shari Lewis' stories are meant to be read, while
the stories in Condensed Fairy Tales are
meant to be told. The stories in One-Minute
Fairy Tales are so short that they leave out
much of the richness of the tales. Condensed
Fairy Tales, on the other hand, offers the
complete story and leaves it up to the parent how
to tell the story. It's a matter of preference.
Finally, there's a book on the
market called Tell Me a Story (by Chase
Collins $8.95, 180 pages, paper, Houghton Mifflin
Company, 1992.) This book devotes itself to
telling parents how to tell a story. The book
achieves its purpose well, but most parents are
interested in telling traditional or historical
fairy tales. Condensed Fairy Tales devotes
about ten pages to how to tell a story, which is
sufficient for most parents'and children'sneeds.
Contents
Introduction:
How to tell a fairy tale; how
to modify a fairy taleshorten it, lengthen
it, personalize it.
Aladdin
Androcles and the Lion
Ashputtel
Beauty and the Beast
Between the Fiddler and the
Dancer
Br'er Rabbit
Casperl
Cinderella
Damon and Pythias
Daniel in the Lion's Den
Goldilocks
Hansel and Gretel
Jack and the Beanstalk
John Henry
Johnny Appleseed
Johnny Cake
Noah's Ark
Paul Bunyan
Pinocchio
Puss 'n Boots
Rapunzel
Little Red Riding Hood
Romeo and Juliet
Rumpelstiltskin
Scheherazade
Sir Gawain and the Green Knight
Sleeping Beauty
Snow White
The Dreamer
The Elves and the Shoemaker
The Emperor's New Clothes
The Frog Prince
The House on the Hill
The Little Bird Grows
The Little Engine that Could
The Little Scarred One
The Lost Half-Hour
The Princess and the Pea
The Snow Queen
The Sorcorer's Apprentice
The Three Little Pigs
The Tin Soldier
The Tortoise and the Hare
The Tug-of-War Between the
Elephant and the Whale
The Twelve Dancing Princesses
The Ugly Duckling
The Valiant Little Tailor
Three Billy Goats Gruff
Thumbelina
Two of Everything
Winnie the Pooh and the Honey
Tree
Appendix
Where to find full-length
children's stories.
Sample Material:
Introduction; Three Stories
Excerpt from The Introduction
One of the first things you
discover when you read or tell fairy tales to
your child is that many are frighteningor
so they seem to us. Take the story of Rumpelstiltskin,
for example. In this story a poor miller, seeking
favor with the king, promises the king that his
daughter can spin hay into gold. The king seizes
the daughter and tells her that she must perform
this feat or she will be killed in the morning.
Rumpelstiltskin appears, making the
gold-spinning possible, but the dwarf magician
exacts a grave price on the daughter. Well, as
with most fairy tales, Rumpelstiltskin has
a happy ending, and that's part of the point,
too.
Yet children don't seem scared
by these tales, or if they do, they don't reveal
their fear. (Psychologists explain this behavior
in a number of ways, none of which are terribly
relevant to the telling of fairy tales.*)
When you tell a story using Condensed
Fairy Tales you can make it as frightening,
or benign as you want. Let's look at Rumpelstiltskin
again. In the G-rated version, the miller, who
recognizes that the kingdom is poor, (suffering a
major trade imbalance perhaps), tells the king
that his daughter can turn straw into gold. The
king, somewhat disbelieving, agrees that the
daughter can try. Rumpelstiltskin, a magician,
offers to perform this magic for the daughterfor
a price. When the king finds out, he banishes
Rumpelstiltskin and marries the daughter because
she tried.
See what you can do if you
don't stick to the prescribed plot? Another
option is to turn out-of-date fairy tales into
less sexist or less stereotyped stories, if you
prefer. For example, instead of having the fair
maiden waiting to be rescued by the handsome
prince, she can be plotting and attempting her
escape.
One twist I like to make in Goldilocks
is, at the end, when Goldilocks is discovered
sleeping in baby bear's bed. She's still very
tired, so Goldilocks runs all the way home to her
crib to take a nap. My daughter, Karen, insists
on completing Goldilocks with the "nap"
even if I forgetand then puts her head down
on the pillow.
The stories in Condensed
Fairy Tales lack some of the detail that
appears in the full-blown story. So feel free to
add as many details as you want. Describe
clothes, shoes, hats, houses, rooms, sounds, what
the characters look like, gardens, individual
trees, pictures on the walls, food on the table,
window coverings, smells, the sky that dayanything
you want. Is the house big, the air cool, the
leaves green or turning colors, the fireplace
lit? How do the characters walk, smile, sound? Is
the house made of wood or stone and is it covered
with ivy? You get the idea. Add dialog, too. Make
up the wordsafter all, the original story
tellers did. Feel free, of course, to incorporate
elements of your child into the taleyour
daughter's name, your son's clothes, for example.
Most of all, keep an eye on
your child. Vary the rhythm of the story, as
needed. If your child is falling asleep, by all
means, continue talking about the colors, shapes,
smells of the objects in the roomsthese
kind of details help summon dream-time. If your
son or daughter loves animals (what child
doesn't?) then add more critters to your version
than there were in the original. If your child
isn't excited about cleaning his or her room,
maybe some of the characters in your stories
clean up a lot.
Some tales are best told in the
present tense; others in the past. Use what best
suits your inclinations.
In Condensed Fairy Tales
you'll find a wide variety of fairy tales
including the classicsGrimm, Mother Goose.
There are also some Bible tales, as well as some
stories from other cultures. These less well
known stories are a good way of acquainting your
child to other cultures, not to mention providing
more entertainment.
Many fairy tales and fables
don't make a whole lot of sense to adults. The
plots don't hold together, the characters
motivations aren't credible. So what? The stories
do make sense to children.
In many of the original
stories, characters do not have names. So create
your own.
Magic is the principle
ingredient in all fairy tales. Don't skimp here.
Children have no trouble believing, and the more
magic, the more fun.
You are the storyteller, which
makes you a central character in each story.
Change the pitch of your voice to talk like a
woman, talk like a man, talk like a child, even
talk like an animal. Vary the rhythm of your
words. Be out of breath when it's called for;
speak quietly or loudly as the role requires.
Sound effectswhistling, foot stomping, a
clap, a gasp, snapping a fingermay be part
of the story, too.
Finally, remember that every
fairy tale usually begins, "Once upon a
time..."
How to Use this Book
You won't gain a complete
understanding of each story by reading the
summary alone. The summary is meant to provide
the basic framework for the story's plot. The
character sketches provide the raw material for
creating the individuals who inhabit these tales.
The characters are listed so that you won't
forget anybody.
At the end of the plot
description are suggestions on how you might tell
the story, and how you could modify it. Following
that is a page for notes to write down your own
variations.
Two
of Everything
Summary
A poor Korean farmer comes
across a brass pot while digging in his small
vegetable garden. The pot, the farmer and his
wife discover, makes two of anything you put
inside it. First they try odds and ends; then
money. By accident, the farmer's wife falls into
the potthere are now two of her! An odd
marriage. But accidents can happen again and the
farmer leapsor falls?into the pot,
which solves their problem.
The Characters
Mr. Kim-Soon. The poor farmer.
Mrs. Kim-Soon. The poor
farmer's wife.
The Plot
Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon live in a
tiny cottage on the side of a mountain. They have
a small patch of land on which to grow food.
One day Mr. Kim-Soon unearthed
a large brass pot, which was itself unusual
because the farmer thought he knew every inch of
that soil. Too big for a cooking pot, too small
for a bath, Mrs. Kim-Soon decided.
Then she dropped a hairpin in
the pot. When she reached inside to retrieve the
pin, there were two identical pins. After
checking to see that no hairpins were missing,
Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon experimented by putting in
a sack of lentils. Out came two sacks! Then they
tried their purses; out came two purses.
Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon put in
purse after purse until they decided just putting
in money would be simpler.
That evening Mrs. Kim-Soon put
in some rice and out came enough rice for an
entire meal. She turned their one candle into
twenty.
Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon would
never be wanting again.
The next day Mrs. Kim-Soon was
making more cabbage in the magic brass pot, when
Mr. Kim-Soon walked in the door. She balanced the
bundles of cabbage while running over to greet
her husband, but lost her balance and fell into
the pot. Mr. Kim-Soon pulled Mrs. Kim-Soon out by
her legs, but out of the pot emerged two Mrs.
Kim-Soons, exactly alike. Mrs. Kim-Soon exclaimed
that she would not put up with another Mrs.
Kim-Soon in the house.
Mrs. Kim-Soon said "Put
her back in the pot," but Mr. Kim-Soon was
quick to point out that that would only make more
Mrs. Kim-Soons. Mr. Kim-Soon took a few steps
backwards and fellwas it an accident?into
the pot.
Mrs. Kim-Soon pulled him out.
Then pulled out the other Mr. Kim-Soon.
But now there wasn't a problem
of what to do with the extra Mrs. Kim-Soon.
The two new Mr. and Mrs.
Kim-Soons set up house next door. Their neighbors
though it was curious that Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon
suddenly prospered, and that a couple who looked
a lot like Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon had moved in
next door. A close relation of Mr. and Mrs.
Kim-Soon said that it was evident that Mr. and
Mrs. Kim-Soon had become so rich that they
decided to have two of everything, including
themselves.
How to Tell the Story
As you can imagine, Mr. and
Mrs. Kim-Soon did not eat meat often; when they
had excess food (which was not often), they
traded it for necessities such as oil for their
lamps, and clothing. Their poorness was a kind of
old world, small village impoverishment. Yet they
were happy.
But much happier after they
found the brass pot. Invent some dialog by
imagining if you had found such a pot. Now
imagine that suddenly you had two of the same
wifeor husband. There would be a bit of
confusion, to say the least. The bantering
between Mr. and Mrs. Kim-Soon must have been
amusing.
Lastly, you can spend some time
describing their house, their clothing, and, of
course, the big brass pot.
Rapunzel
Summary
Rapunzel is the story of a
child who is raised by an evil witch, and who
grows long, beautiful hair. Rapunzel lives in a
tower; the only way up to the tower is to climb
Rapunzel's hair. Rapunzel sees nobody but the
witch until a prince wanders by one day, and
climbs up her hair. The witch punishes Rapunzel,
and later the prince is hurt falling from the
tower; but eventually the prince and Rapunzel
live happily every after.
The Characters
Rapunzel's Mother
Wants a child, and after much
wanting becomes pregnant. Enigmatically, she
covets a vegetable growing in the witch's garden
called a rapunzel, . (Is this the witch's doing?)
Her need for the rapunzel is so great that she
becomes pale and weak.
Rapunzel's Father
Also wants a child badly.
Yields to his wife's needs. Both the mother and
father disappear from the story shortly after
Rapunzel is born.
The Witch
An evil, mysterious character,
with the classic, repulsive look of a witch. Her
source of income isn't revealed, but her powers
seem limited only by her inclinations. Despite
her evilness, there is a hint of loneliness and
pity about her. Her motives are unclear. Called
Mother Gothel by Rapunzel.
Rapunzel
The star of the story. It's
never known how Rapunzel's hair becomes so longperhaps
genetic, perhaps a consequence of the witch's
powers. Rapunzel is beautiful and lonely,
lonelier even than the witch. How Rapunzel
occupies her day isn't clear; perhaps braiding
and unbraiding her hair is a full-time pastime.
The Prince
The king's son. Handsome and
valiant, like all princes. Not much substance, so
the prince's character and looks can be
embellished as much as you like.
The Plot
A husband and wife long for a
child, and after many years the wife becomes
pregnant.
The couple live in a house
adjacent to a witch's house. From their house
they can see the witch's garden, which is
surrounded by a high wall.
The wife becomes enchanted,
almost enthralled, with the rapunzel, an unusual
leafy vegetable, growing in the witch's garden;
she grows pale and weak because she cannot have
the rapunzel. Finally the husband goes into the
witch's garden, gathers some rapunzel, and makes
a salad for them.
When the witch finds out (you
expected she wouldn't?), she threatens to cast a
terrible spell on the husband and wife. Only by
promising the witch their child do they avoid the
spell.
The couple name the child
Rapunzel; almost immediately afterwards Rapunzel
is spirited away by the witch. When Rapunzel is
twelve she is made to live alone in a tower in
the forest. Over the years, Rapunzel grows the
longest, most beautiful hair in the world.
Rapunzel herself becomes the most beautiful woman
in the world. The only way up to Rapunzel's room
in the tower is by climbing up her hair, which
she must braid to make this possible. That's how
the witch brings food and other necessities.
"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let
down your hair / and I will climb up the golden
stair" is the witch's frequent request.
One day a prince wanders by. He
hears Rapunzel singing from her room and becomes
captivated. One day he hides near the tower and
watches the witch say, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel,
let down your hair."
The next night he visits
Rapunzel. When he gets to Rapunzel's room, she is
frightened, because she had never seen a man
before. But the prince is kind and Rapunzel
decides she wants to marry him. The prince visits
many times more.
The witch was unaware of the
prince's visits until Rapunzel asks the witch why
she was so much heavier climbing up her hair than
the prince. The witch is angered, cuts Rapunzel's
hair off, and banishes her in the wilderness.
When the prince comes to visit,
he climbs up Rapunzel's hair, but the witch is at
the other end. The prince, in grief, leaps from
the tower. Not killed, he is blinded by landing
on thorns.
The prince wanders the
wilderness for many years. Finally he hears that
familiar, sweet voice. It is Rapunzel, who hugs
the prince and weeps on him. Her tears un-blind
the prince. They live happily ever after.
How to Tell the Story
Rapunzel can be shortened by
skipping ahead twelve years: Rapunzel, captured
by a witch, lives in the tower of a castle, is a
fair beginning.
Or, you can embelish the story:
The witch's castle is cold and dark. Paintings of
witch ancestors cover the walls. (Where do
witches come from, anyway?) Preface the prince's
appearance with some background about his
characterperhaps he is an archer, perhaps a
clever hunter. How did the witch raise Rapunzel?
How did she dress Rapunzel?
Because the story takes place
over many years, you have the opportunity to fill
in those years with details. Not, "The
prince wandered the forest for years."
Instead, describe how the prince lived during
those years. Maybe the prince and Rapunzel
wandered within feet of each other; Rapunzel
could have been sleeping under a bed of leaves
while the prince was walking by, and thus never
noticed her. You decide.
The
Elves and the Shoemaker
Summary
This is a story about a poor
shoemaker who ran out of material from which to
make shoes. Magically, new shoes appear in his
shop overnight. This happens again and again.
When the shoemaker and his wife stay awake all
night to see what's up, they find two naked elves
working hard. The shoemaker decides to make the
elves clothes. The elves put on the clothes, and
then are never seen again. But the shoemaker is
left with good luck.
The Characters
The Shoemaker
An elderly, kindly man, having
bad luck lately. His business isn't going well,
through no fault of his own. He can't make shoes
to sell because he can't afford material to make
the shoes.
The Shoemaker's Wife
Also a kindly person. She helps
the shoemaker sell shoes.
The Elves
Tiny beings with implied
magical powers and fantastic shoemaking skills.
It's unclear how they came to know about the
shoemaker's problems. The elves wear no clothing.
The Customers
A small cast of characters who
would like to buy shoes from the shoemaker, if
only he had something to offer.
The Plot
As the story begins, the
shoemaker has become poorer and poorer over the
years. Now he only had enough leather to make one
more pair of shoes.
He planned to do the best he
could with the material at hand, and cut a
pattern. When he got up in the morning, the shoes
were finishedand perfect, too.
A customer walked into the shop
and bought the shoes. With the money, the
shoemaker purchased material for two more pairs
of shoes. He cut patterns for those shoes, and
went to sleep, planning on sewing the shoes in
the morning.
In the morning, there were two
more beautiful pairs of shoes made. The shoemaker
sold the shoes at a great price. Now the
shoemaker had money to buy material for four
pairs of shoes.
Next morning, there were four
finished pairs of shoesand they were bought
right away.
The process continued and in
short order, the shoemaker became a wealthy man.
One evening the shoemaker and
his wife decided to stay awake to see how this
was happening. They saw two elves, hard at work.
But the elves wore no clothes. As soon as the
elves were finished they ran away.
So the shoemaker and his wife
made the elves some clothes to thank them. The
shoemaker was concerned that the elves were
outside in the cold with no clothes. The
shoemaker and his wife worked and day and made
tiny shirts, pants, caps, coats and socks.
When the elves returned instead
of cuttings for shoes they found clothes. They
put on the clothes with delight and sung a song:
"Now that we're boys so fine and neat/Why
cobble more for others' feet?"
The elves never returned, but
the shoemaker continued to prosper and had good
luck in everything he did.
How to Tell the Story
Your child may be curious about
what the shoes looked like. Probably not like
Nikes, or velcro Stride Rites. But they might
have been children's shoes!
Also it's possible that the
shoemaker let the process continue for a few days
or months before staying up to find out what was
happening. Perhaps the shoemaker left out some
cookies in the interim. One version of the fairy
tale has the shoemaker staying up not long before
Christmas, and leaving the clothes out on
Christmas eve.
Add dialog between the
shoemaker and his wife. You might also be
inclined to mention the shoemaker's childrennaturally,
they're grown up and living in another village.
Then there's the matter of the elves dancing
about the shoemaker's shop: I imagine it could
have been quite a scene.
You can also make up a lot
about the elves. What do they look like? Where do
they come from? What does the clothing the
shoemaker and his wife made look like? Tiny
socks, tiny shirts, tiny pantschildren love
to hear about miniturized things.
This isn't a story you have to
worry about shortening; it passes quickly.
Manuscript Details
Length: Approx. 250 manuscript
pages/51-70 stories
Illustrations: One for each
story
Time to delivery: Eight months
About the Author
Bill Adler, Jr.
is the president of Adler & Robin Books, Inc.
a literary agency and book packaging company. He
is the author of over a dozen books including Outwitting
Squirrels: 101 Cunning Stratagems to Reduce
Dramatically the Egregious Misappropriation of
Seed From Your Bird Feeder by Squirrels
(Chicago Review Press), The Home Remodeler's
Combat Manual (HarperCollins), The Great
American Answer Book (Avon, with Beth
Pratt-Dewey), and The Non-Smoker's Bill of
Rights (William Morrow, with Steve Allen), Baby-English:
A Dictionary for Interpreting the Secret Language
of English (Pocket Books, with Karen Adler,
age two), Outwitting Critters,
(HarperCollins), and Outwitting the Neighbors (Fireside).
Outwitting Critters was a Literary Guild
selection.
Of all his
books, Adler's favorite is Outwitting
Squirrels, not just because it was a treat to
write but because it became such a success even
after twenty publishers turned the proposal down.
While reviewing this book USA Today called
Adler, "A trendspotter." The Wall
Street Journal called the book "A
masterpiece." The book was twice
enthusiastically reviewed in The New York
Times and The Washington Post. Outwitting
Squirrels is not only a testament to the
cunning and perseverance of squirrels, it is a
testament to Bill Adler's creative insight into
the book buiness. The book has gone into printing
after printing, and now the number of copies sold
is in six digits. Regardie's magazine had
this to say about the book: "Adler still
feeds the birds, but now he also squirrels away
royalties." Here are what some reviewers
have said about some of Adler's books:
Outwitting
Critters
Adler tells engaging stories,
many bordering on suburban legend. Outwitting
Critters surfeits with interesting facts and
horse-sense hints. The Village Voice
Adler has the answers, and they
are creative as well as nontoxic. Chicago
Tribune
He offers...comprehensive
treatment of the subject, and provides
recommendations that are grounded in common
sense. Library Journal
Quayle
Hunting: The Dan Quayle Joke Book
The Adlers really should be
ashamed trying to make a buck off the vice
president. Minneapolis
Star Tribune
Outwitting
Squirrels
In light of his entertaining,
instructional, and philosophical contribution to
the understanding of and possible solutions to
such a universal problem, we should make Bill
Adler, Jr. an honorary New Hampshirite. Monadnock
Ledger
What the birdfeeders of America
long have needed is a guru...I'm pleased to
announce there's a new voice on the front lines
of birdfeeding. His name is Bill Adler, Jr...Adler assembled his findings into a nifty
volume entitled Outwitting Squirrels. Minneapolis
Star Tribune
Outwitting
Squirrels...ingenious tricks to keep squirrels
from eating all the seed when the feeders fail.
The Washington Post
Bill Adler, Jr., a writer in
Washington, has just published a treatise titled,
Outwitting Squirrels...[His stratagems are]
particularly appealing. The New York
Times
A paperback sure to please.
St. Petersburg Times
At last! A book that addresses
life's really important issue, or in any case,
the issue most crucial to people who like to feed
birds. The Detriot Free Press
Adler still feeds the birds,
but now he also squirrels away royalties.
Regardie's
A masterpiece of squirrel
stratagems. The Wall Street Journal
An excellent book...both
entertainingly witty and extremely helpful.
A must. The Ottawa
Citizen
I learned a lot from Bill
Adler. The Toronto Star
Impeccable
Birdfeeding
Perspective makes this book
different: Mr. Adler puts the needs of the
hobbyist before those of the birds. The
Dallas Morning News
The advice he delivers is
supremely practical, his style spare and
straightforward and his sense of humor is
enlivening throughout the book. This is an
eminently readable book, perhaps the only one the
amateur bird-feeding hobbyist needs on his shelf.
The Washington Post
Adler &
Robin Books, Inc. specializes in nonfiction for
adults. Approximately twenty-five percent of the
company's work involves representing authors as a
literary agency. Some of the company's agented
and packaged projects include Make Your Bank
Work for You (Consumer Reports Books), The
Mole People (Chicago Review Press), The
Way We Were: 1963, the Year Kennedy Was Shot (Carroll
& Graf), The Woman's Guide to Yeast
Infections (Pocket Books), Scout's Honor:
Sexual Abuse in the Boy Scouts (Prima), and How
to Be a Successful Fertility Patient (William
Morrow and Company.) The company's emphasis ¾ and greatest success¾ is in creating and developing
book projects in-house. As Adler puts it,
"Other than writing books myself, there's
nothing more pleasurable in business than coming
up with a book idea, nurturing it and working
hard to turn it into a book that people buy. I
like to think of this as 'book inventing.'"
Adler & Robin Books, Inc. employs a full-time
staff of three book inventors.
Besides books,
Adler's articles have appeared in The New York
Times, The Washington Post, Sierra,
Dossier, and other newspapers and
magazines. The first publication he ever wrote
for was the much overlooked quarterly, American
Drycleaner.
During his free
time Adler flies airplanes: a Mooney 201, Cessna
Skyhawk, and Piper Warrior. He is also a licensed
amateur radio operator, and is known by the call
sign, N3JAV. He is an avid cross-country skier.
Bill Adler
received his B.A. from Wesleyan University, where
he majored in government and did graduate work in
organic chemistry. He received his M.A. from
Columbia University's School of International
Affairs, specializing in Soviet foreign policy, a
field that is now ancient history. In the early
1980s, Adler was a Congressional lobbyist on
defense and foreign policy, and then a political
consultant. His study on nuclear breeder reactors
was published in The Congressional Record. He
also served as a Member of the United States
Delegation to the U.N. Commission on Human Rights
in 1978.
Adler is the son
of Bill Adler, the New York literary agent.
He lives with
his wife, Peggy Robin, also a multi-talented
writer, and co-founder of Adler & Robin
Books, Inc., in Washington, D.C. They have a
daughter, Karen, whose first book, Baby-English,
will be published in 1993 around Karen's
third birthday. Adler is brushing up on his fairy
tales because he is expecting a second child in
May.
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